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Pay the Piper
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Sunday, 4th December 2016 @ 04:52:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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To love so completely
And take over freely
To deny it weakly
Acting all squeaky
Clean and straight shooting
For the home team they/'/re rooting
Yet you continue disputing
In your inner sanctum spewing
Gaslighting. Convoluting.
Innocence polluting.
From the hip I/'/m strewing
Your truth!
There/'/s proof,
You/'/re an animal,
Childhood cannibal
You can run, but you can/'/t hide
Catch karma on the backside
I/'/ll be there, and I/'/ll stop by
Watch your pain and eternal cry
The time is coming, ticking down
In pools of perversion, surely drown
The end is here, and I am ready
In my cross hairs and my aim is steady
The gruesome pain inflicted was worth this strength
Related; but you/'/re beneath my wavelength.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2016-12-04 16:52:43]
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Re: Pay the Piper
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 4th December 2016 @ 05:00:58 PM AEST
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Well I must say this was truly awesome.
Very unique word schemes and the flow had many emotions wrapped up all in one poem and it was truly believable. Very impressive write.
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Re: Pay the Piper
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by duff on
Monday, 5th December 2016 @ 06:41:55 PM AEST
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This made me smile. Sometimes things just bring out an ear to ear smile and this did that. Clever and well put together.
"Catch karma on the backside" Great line. Great job.
duff
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Re: Pay the Piper
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by softerware on
Monday, 5th December 2016 @ 10:23:08 PM AEST
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Shades of vigilantes! Reminds me of the Wizard of Oz at the point where you say YOU CAN RUN BUT YOU CANT HIDE...the witch says..Ill get you my pretty!
Your sarcasm is not lost in this write and a soundtrack of menacing laughter would fit the mood of your steady crosshairs.
I don/'/t know what your target has done, but I am vowed to say on the other side of your street!
Good solid mood throughout and strong emotions to pulse it along. An enjoyable storyline leaving us to imagine what befalls your antihero. softerware |
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Re: Pay the Piper
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th December 2016 @ 11:08:28 PM AEST
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Hey you, get offa my cloud.
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Re: Pay the Piper
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th December 2016 @ 11:13:38 PM AEST
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See? I don/'/t need to write when I got you doing it for me. I could give this to a couple people and just say, "Yeah, what she said!"
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