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Thirst
Contributed by
duff
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Monday, 5th December 2016 @ 06:56:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Hunting outside perfect circle
Share not their corners guile
Iris massaging v-necks vein
Red highway governing why
Breeding beautiful meaning
Prerequisites desirable spy
Lips embrace taming a fight
A hells satellite cradling pain
The fiend bows down to see
Remove your halo and drink
Rebels come crawling tonight
So eager to see the goodbye
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duff
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2016-12-05 18:56:24]
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Re: Thirst
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 6th December 2016 @ 09:17:43 AM AEST
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This makes me think of vampires. It also makes me feel powerful and alive in a way I dare not entertain.
Thank you. :)
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Re: Thirst
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by ming on
Tuesday, 6th December 2016 @ 09:52:44 PM AEST
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Poetry is so much fun! She got vampires, I get a guy in a bar watching the players and looking for meaning to stay. Lovers & fights, angels & rebels, & a fiend! The fiend, the vein, the crawling, the highway. Love this intriguing write.
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Re: Thirst
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 7th December 2016 @ 08:02:27 PM AEST
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I got what Scorp got.
But I wasn/'/t so sure.
That/'/s what makes it work.
Its open to interpretation.
Nice job!
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Re: Thirst
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by softerware on
Thursday, 8th December 2016 @ 07:19:13 PM AEST
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(Remove your halo and drink)...of this curiously seductive write. It has a strong edge of foreboding; and reading it is like walking along a razor. Cleverly it departs the ending just as it is approaching (rebels come crawling tonight) and I can tell you, this reader was NOT (so eager to see the goodbye)!
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Re: Thirst
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 15th December 2016 @ 10:49:26 PM AEST
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The watchers always crawl
creepy as they are.....
I tried to message you
but I keep getting that debug thing. |
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