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A Dip Inside Myself
Contributed by
invierno
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Saturday, 10th December 2016 @ 08:44:17 PM in AEST
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A dip inside myself by myself
for myself
finds me chilly here,
heated there,
wrong,
strong,
right,
long gone.
ever changing, seeking better,
humility has found me
willing,
fulfilling,
accepting,
rejecting my same old song,
at last finding a better way to move along
this ever changing path.
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invierno
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2016-12-10 20:44:17]
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Re: A Dip Inside Myself
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 11th December 2016 @ 08:59:55 AM AEST
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Great poem Mike.
You can/'/t expand your horizons by seeing everything as black and white and your way may not always be the right way. You have to open up and realize that what we may think we know or were taught may not be the right way.
Plus it/'/s just easier to go through life with an open mind. Great write.
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Re: A Dip Inside Myself
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 13th December 2016 @ 04:32:15 PM AEST
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I find it ironic that this inspiring delight of growth and metamorphosis speaks to the emotions of the person throughout, yet in the very last line it credits the EVER CHANGING PATH.
I suspect it is not the path that is changing, Michael, but the clever writer!
Bravo for the reassuring and your hand-holding style of writing that brings us along on every possible experience you can share!
You are a writer of life. softerware |
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Re: A Dip Inside Myself
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 15th December 2016 @ 11:10:56 PM AEST
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where is that path at
I wanna change too
but
I am trapped on this crazy roundabout..... |
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Re: A Dip Inside Myself
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 20th December 2016 @ 01:37:24 PM AEST
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Reminds me exactly of a friend I have, who even now, despite all the years resolutely believes his views, thoughts and opinions are the only ones that truly count.
At least you have accepted there are other views.
I should really get him to read this and see if it will change his mind too.
Steve |
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