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Point of View
Contributed by
duff
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Friday, 16th December 2016 @ 07:03:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Speaking when they rest
Props and mirrors smile
Lipstick a transformation
Boredoms unknown trial
Pigtails cute and damned
Kool cigarette fingertips
Dance among walls style
Blowing kisses formation
Pose again like a juvenile
Shes midnight undressed
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duff
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2016-12-16 19:03:39]
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Re: Point of View
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 17th December 2016 @ 10:24:58 AM AEST
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Is this about how realistic porn is? Hahaha. Or someone performing on camera... That last line is killer. And the props and mirrors smile line...I have been enjoying your writes immensely, and I/'/ve noticed you didn/'/t always write these clipped poems.
I/'/m happy to have discovered your talents, a little late, but at least we can venture back in time here. I suppose it/'/s not half bad that YPDC has so many incredible writers that we all get overlooked by someone, at some point!
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Re: Point of View
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 17th December 2016 @ 12:09:21 PM AEST
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What Scorp said. lol
You have a knack with open ended poems. You let the reader come to their own conclusions. But it doesn/'/t work for everybody but you pull it off time and time again!
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Re: Point of View
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th December 2016 @ 11:01:47 PM AEST
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the wisher was she was
the guy who knew real
saw through seeing
like he do about the
world that is true
having a mom and sisters
and a daughter too
the wisher was she was
today tomorrow and
forever
true
Peace!
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