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Splice
Contributed by
spike
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Tuesday, 27th December 2016 @ 10:10:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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Im killing your name. every last syllable of it. extinguishing that label of lineage bequeathed by inheritance.
gone the formality, the sobriquet, the cognomen, the moniker, the first and last, the future and the past.
if I could, I would scour your genes from the flesh; flush that toxic legacy from my veins. splice in less angry, more patient. whitewash the selfish and paint beautiful; remove those dead eyes and dark thoughts.
but until that is possible, Ill be content with killing your attribution, my shame, and consigning it to the grave of forgotten names.
Copyright ©
spike
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2016-12-27 22:10:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Splice
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 28th December 2016 @ 12:23:04 AM AEST (User
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ooh who /*****/ you off
good release of anger,
I like it..... |
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Re: Splice
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Thursday, 29th December 2016 @ 06:44:51 PM AEST (User
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Great line, /'/ I’ll be content
with killing your attribution, my shame,
and consigning it to the grave
of forgotten names./'/
ming |
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Re: Splice
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Friday, 30th December 2016 @ 07:18:12 PM AEST (User
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Remind me not to tick you off...imagine what you do to people NOT of the same blood...unless this person is an ex, making you a female.
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Re: Splice
(User Rating: 1 ) by alicewhite on
Saturday, 25th February 2017 @ 06:28:39 PM AEST (User
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Wow and ouch and wow unbelievable! Your intent is overwhelmingly precise and delivered here with razor like precision , frighteningly good and I wouldn/'/t mess lol |
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