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The Goodbyes Letter
Contributed by
shelby
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Wednesday, 28th December 2016 @ 12:49:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dear whoevers
Yes tis true there is a few of you,
some are out of my view
one crossed over to the Heavens
but you rest heavy in my mind
and still send nail driven pain
in my heart.
So this is for you.
I want to unglue you from me,
heart,soul,mind,body.
Shake the blue and bruises you caused
and I know you aren/'/t sorry
I am only sorry for knowing you.
So dear whoevers,
I write you this note, one none of you will read,
but I do it for me to set myself free
from the ice cold grips of your heartless selves.
The electric pain you inflicted on me
will not be my haunting wind when the sky is dark
nor will those feelings pierce my soul anymore
my mind,spirit you will own no more control.
I rise above and away from you
a little bird,on broken wing to sing once more
and be beautifully free, from the twisted limbs of you,all of you.
Then when its written, I may strike a match, and burn the page
and from a distance wherever you are,I hope you feel that heat,
and then the ember slowly die and leave you like a ghost
maybe then one day realizing the error of your ways
and karma floats a bubble of despair above your head
because then you will know, what you lost in me.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2016-12-28 12:49:08]
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Re: The Goodbyes Letter
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by duff on
Wednesday, 28th December 2016 @ 06:04:34 PM AEST
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In your words you have created a rainbow of emotions. You can feel a variety of moods. Uplifting, moving and strength well positioned to conquer. A most captivating write.
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Re: The Goodbyes Letter
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 31st December 2016 @ 12:04:00 PM AEST
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I feel like I just witnessed a caged bird break free...Wonderful, powerful, full of strength and determination. Everything I have struggled to put into words myself. Thank you for wording this so well!
High five, Michelle. You got this.
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Re: The Goodbyes Letter
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by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 24th May 2017 @ 08:06:34 AM AEST
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Youve always had a way with words my dear friend and this is no exception. Miss you and hope to see you again soon.
Rich |
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Re: The Goodbyes Letter
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 24th May 2018 @ 11:06:27 PM AEST
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I/'/m with Scorp on this!
Bravo! |
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Re: The Goodbyes Letter
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by Jecks on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2019 @ 04:19:30 PM AEST
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| I hope this was as truly freeing as it felt when I read it. To unlock and discard some of those old nagging chains. How uplifting it would be! hank you for sharing this. |
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Re: The Goodbyes Letter
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by Vic on
Thursday, 17th September 2020 @ 06:28:30 AM AEST
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| I feel you, Michelle. I like the way you/'/ve expressed the heaviness and then the liberation. It is beautiful. I wish you well and a lighter heart filled with pleasantness. Cheers! Vic |
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