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The View Ahead
Contributed by
spike
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Friday, 30th December 2016 @ 04:48:57 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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I took a dive, over the edge,
and landed on a ledge that first
seemed too frail to support me.
yet for all its newness,
its delicate construction,
I soon felt sure footing,
and comfortable support
for the view ahead.
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spike
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2016-12-30 04:48:57]
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Re: The View Ahead
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by Invierno on
Friday, 30th December 2016 @ 07:10:53 PM AEST
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A very positive poem....quite nice.
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Re: The View Ahead
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by softerware on
Sunday, 1st January 2017 @ 02:51:19 PM AEST
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I like this! The first step is always uncertain, and for all our progress --we don/'/t like change!I
A clear invitation to move out of our comfort zone! Your clever message reminds us that it is not possible to score a home run with one foot on home base.
JUMP!
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