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night comes
Contributed by
ming
on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2017 @ 12:45:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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the lights off
house empty
incapable of voice
before the moon
all the shine
inside syllables
wane as
stories end
one night
is a train mourn
unpreventable.
Copyright ©
ming
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2017-01-03 12:45:12]
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Re: night comes
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by duff on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2017 @ 01:04:25 PM AEST
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Your poetry is one of exploration. Your words hit the page and doors swing wide open with possibility. There is always intrigue and mystery. Great job ming!
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Re: night comes
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2017 @ 09:40:11 PM AEST
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Silent night, only night. Your style is provocative. Like a single brushstroke on each new page, the colors are vivid and seduce imagination to wander beside you. Never do you leave us without room to add our own hues to your work. It is an invitation to help you build a rainbow every time you write, and who could resist the artist handing you a brush and bidding you to paint in your own hand!
Thank you for beginning the thought and leaving us to seek the ending! It is not resistible! softerware |
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Re: night comes
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 4th January 2017 @ 10:41:16 AM AEST
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Evocative and haunting, Ming. I envy how you say so much with so few words. A rare talent.
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Re: night comes
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 5th January 2017 @ 10:24:28 PM AEST
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wish I could convey what I think in so few words
like your style of writing..... |
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