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Jack
Contributed by
duff
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Saturday, 7th January 2017 @ 08:01:50 AM in AEST
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DarkPoetry
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So quiet the cobble
Rain bleeding black
Wet transit mystify
Silhouette calming
The flicker witness
Seething in shadow
Alleyway breathing
On lustrous blade
His steps echo the
Whitechapel night
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duff
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2017-01-07 08:01:50]
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Re: Jack
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by ming on
Sunday, 8th January 2017 @ 01:11:14 AM AEST
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Spooky Mr. Ripper. Good one.
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Re: Jack
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by softerware on
Sunday, 8th January 2017 @ 07:18:26 PM AEST
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Such a journey! Takes us there to hear the rain; feel the dark closing in; listen to the wooden cab wheels on the cobblestone streets. Spooky little summary of a killer/'/s lullaby.
Your choice of words describe in swift flashes all the emotions and colors, and leave goosebumps on my goosebumps! Thank you for your quick and accurate memory!
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Re: Jack
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 14th January 2017 @ 08:01:57 PM AEST
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The night prowler is on the loose
watching.....from the shadows...... |
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