|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
A SMALL GLASS OF WATER
Contributed by
poewhit
on
Sunday, 8th January 2017 @ 10:46:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
One small glass of water. The waiter said, "THAT WAS THE ORDER". In the pantry the man looked at me. We have no water, LET IT BE. What will I tell him, HIS MAJESTY ! OFF WITH MY HEAD ! It seems to me. Oh your honor, the pantry said, "LET BE". WHAT ! No water in my kingdom. How can this fate, NO FREEDOM ! But, what, after this - TO SEA. Find me some water - ON ONE KNEE. That is your quest - NOW FLEE ! Yes your majesty - A crusade it will be. For a small glass of water. Call all in quarter - YES. Even the porter
from my poem book DREAMS 2
Copyright ©
poewhit
... [
2017-01-08 10:46:53] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: A SMALL GLASS OF WATER
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Sunday, 8th January 2017 @ 06:16:21 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Can/'/t say why but this reminds me of Alice in Wonderland. Perhaps it is your reference to OFF with my head, and the omnipotent ruler who must be obeyed.
I remember when we used to use shrimp for bait; let/'/s hope water doesn/'/t become so scarce and coveted!
A spooky little read to give us pause.
softerware |
|
|
Re: A SMALL GLASS OF WATER
(User Rating: 1 ) by alicewhite on
Sunday, 12th March 2017 @ 03:14:29 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Eyes wide shut upon knees black magic midnight eat me drink me ritual thirst quenching bride and groom feast, loved your style n mystical flow weaved skillfully here throughout the otherwise mundane , exceptional |
|
|
|