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DIRTY AIR
Contributed by
poewhit
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Wednesday, 11th January 2017 @ 12:21:04 PM in AEST
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Mighty cloud in the sky.
Purple, orange, must ask why ?
Smoke stack glory, over the hill.
MASK ON - feel less ill.
Sex life went - that pill.
Oxygen mask, token the thrill.
Went to church, GOD cried.
Smog enveloped the temple wide.
Many cars upon the ground.
Monoxide wonder feeling sound.
Vomit stench, deep breath now.
Doctor said, "FARM WITH COWS".
from my poem book DREAMS
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poewhit
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2017-01-11 12:21:04]
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Re: DIRTY AIR
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th January 2017 @ 10:01:31 PM AEST
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| Perfect rhythm 👍 |
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Re: DIRTY AIR
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by Tiny_Tina on
Thursday, 12th January 2017 @ 06:46:59 PM AEST
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Very nice.
Thx
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Re: DIRTY AIR
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 14th January 2017 @ 07:56:07 PM AEST
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Nice flow
I like it. |
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Re: DIRTY AIR
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 16th March 2017 @ 09:04:15 AM AEST
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scums it up nicely!
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