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I Play You
Contributed by
duff
on
Thursday, 12th January 2017 @ 07:52:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Obscenity enter
Wrecking plays
Repeatedly sick
Abandon please
The party to cry
Sweater comfort
Nauseating tears
A beverage pure
Drowning flames
In time to breathe
Copyright ©
duff
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2017-01-12 19:52:59]
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Re: I Play You
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by ming on
Thursday, 19th January 2017 @ 12:32:07 PM AEST
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Lot/'/s of cool things here./'/abandoned please the party to cry/'/ /'/sweater comfort/'/ /'/drowning flames in time to breathe/'/ Actually, just the whole poem.
ming |
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Re: I Play You
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 10th January 2022 @ 02:15:53 PM AEST
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Smirk. Love the title and sarcasm throughout.
Imitation is flattery, no? 😏 Good stuff here.
Those two closing lines are perfect.
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