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Clockwork
Contributed by
alicewhite
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Saturday, 18th February 2017 @ 01:09:27 PM in AEST
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I am clockwork
U wind me up
N u know u love it
N I crave a human touch
Wind me up n watch me do the dishes
In the kitchen sink
But I am clockwork
N I/'/m not supposed to think
Do as I/'/m told
Do as I/'/m told
Some men are born with greatness
Others have to strive
Some men have greatness thrust upon them
N that/'/s great
But I/'/m clockwork so who am I
I/'/ll do as I/'/m told
Do as I/'/m told
But the hands are ticking ticking ticking ticking ticking
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Re: Clockwork
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th February 2017 @ 09:24:53 PM AEST
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a one two
a one two
two chord
then three
don/'/t need a clock
just a beating heart
in the dark
the eyes I
remembered
the animal I
uncanny simplicity
of guitar
And the female eye
that burns through
a soul
You could play it well
And I wash the dishes
mesmerized
yeah,
And I like to clean windows
in the pouring rain
as well as bake!
Peace!
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Re: Clockwork
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by softerware on
Saturday, 25th February 2017 @ 07:50:21 PM AEST
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If this was born out of trying to play the guitar, I want to hear the song! Once again there are lessons embedded in the story line. It takes me more than one read to find them, which makes your work a puzzle worth reading!
One constant truth lies in the last line; and it applies universally to man and beast alike.
But man is the only species that KNOWS he will not live forever. Tick tick, indeed, alicewhite!
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Re: Clockwork
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by thezenmonkey on
Saturday, 4th March 2017 @ 08:07:36 PM AEST
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ticking and tocking
when Alicewhite plays guitar
she gets the whole crowd rocking! |
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Re: Clockwork
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 16th March 2017 @ 05:56:08 PM AEST
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I/'/m with softerware on this.
Alicewhite I like your style. Bravo.
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