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Yesterday and Tomorrow
Contributed by
hopelezz
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Monday, 20th February 2017 @ 05:47:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Yesterday still lingers in my mind,
Tomorrow I know That ill try to be fine..
Figuring it all, Why did you have to go,
As time ticks, you haunted me so slow..
Keeping myself stronger everyday,
Reminiscing the past, slowly fades away..
But still my heart,shouted your name,
Even if I have to forget you, My love would still be the same..
To keep you always in my mind..
Your death is my pain that I strive every line..
Here in your Grave with so much sorrow..
Tears do flow since yesterday and tomorrow..
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hopelezz
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2017-02-20 17:47:56]
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Re: Yesterday and Tomorrow
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by FireStarter on
Tuesday, 21st February 2017 @ 02:43:48 PM AEST
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| Damn, I could feel your pain with every sentence. Good write c: |
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Re: Yesterday and Tomorrow
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by alicewhite on
Saturday, 25th February 2017 @ 05:25:59 PM AEST
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| I know that feeling, you capture the pain of a broken heart haunted by emotional memories of only the good times and none of the bad, it hurts too much to know your no longer loved or maybe accepting you were never loved , still in love with the idea of being love and someone being in love with me ,ignorance is bliss and it doesn/'/t last forever , now that he has gone I m still in shock I can/'/t deny he no longer cares but I still can/'/t help crying over the good times and I/'/m in love with him in my head x |
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Re: Yesterday and Tomorrow
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 26th February 2017 @ 03:26:11 PM AEST
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| I love this! beautifully written. the sadness is expressed so well, I really feel it. |
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Re: Yesterday and Tomorrow
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 5th March 2017 @ 05:30:57 AM AEST
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Felt the pain in this flow
well done..... |
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Re: Yesterday and Tomorrow
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 16th March 2017 @ 09:01:51 AM AEST
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Write it out, man, write it out. Cathartic bliss.
Invierno |
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