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Aptitude of Alice setting precursors to bob
Contributed by
alicewhite
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Thursday, 23rd February 2017 @ 05:53:52 PM in AEST
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Today I saw a unicorn
That unicorn was drawn
I heard the sound it made
As the unicorn was played
Longitude latitude
Aptitude
Gratitude
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alicewhite
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2017-02-23 17:53:52]
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Re: Aptitude of Alice setting precursors to bob
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by ming on
Friday, 24th February 2017 @ 01:46:13 AM AEST
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Scotland is where this took me. Nice.
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Re: Aptitude of Alice setting precursors to bob
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by softerware on
Saturday, 25th February 2017 @ 07:18:25 PM AEST
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I so enjoy the change of rhythm you have used. It makes the last three lines frosting on the cake!
Unconventional and precise!
Unicorns are very nice!
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Re: Aptitude of Alice setting precursors to bob
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by Invierno on
Friday, 10th March 2017 @ 03:11:16 PM AEST
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diggit Alice. As soft said, unicorns are cool. I don/'/t know why they arn/'/t yellow, and maybe the /'/horn/'/ is really a cob?
KEEP writing and dammit, let/'/s chat.
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