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cultivated shadows
Contributed by
ming
on
Saturday, 25th February 2017 @ 11:57:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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like a step
missing
still
held
breath
whispering heartbeats
recede forgotten
unlocking door
after door
a dream of the dead
like a sugarcube
in a rainstorm
yield the space
shifting star field
thrown there
a midnight carnival
sheen-like
as a passage
out.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2017-02-25 11:57:20]
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Re: cultivated shadows
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 25th February 2017 @ 03:36:27 PM AEST
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I treasure all you write, Ming. Normally I can divine the inkling, if not outright meaning, behind the words. Not to distract from the quality or style of this poem, as this request is not detrimental in anyway, but I do not have a clue on this one. Any chance of a pm with a brief revealing of intent?
Thanks,
Invierno |
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Re: cultivated shadows
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by alicewhite on
Saturday, 25th February 2017 @ 04:10:07 PM AEST
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| Beautiful otherworldly mystery , I too need your help to unravel your words to find the true treasures of meaning you have hidden here x |
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Re: cultivated shadows
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by ming on
Saturday, 25th February 2017 @ 04:59:13 PM AEST
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| I tried to pm you, it said some type of error. Sorry. |
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Re: cultivated shadows
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th February 2017 @ 02:52:02 AM AEST
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yes, ming, this is pure ming
I was thinking just around the
corner of my eye might
rest the shadow of my mind
just always around another
corner this blockage of
light / the light I cannot yet see
Well done Sir Ming!
Peace! |
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Re: cultivated shadows
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 27th February 2017 @ 09:58:33 AM AEST
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| ooh it is like a trip down into wonderLand...... |
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