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Whore bride
Contributed by
alicewhite
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Saturday, 25th February 2017 @ 07:29:34 PM in AEST
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Whore of revelation I am Bride of Christ
Rahab
Aliester Crowley
Birthday poem
August 10th
Curiouser and curiouser
My head is spinning
Eat me drink me
Cherry ripe
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Re: Whore bride
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by softerware on
Saturday, 25th February 2017 @ 08:25:30 PM AEST
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My head is spinning also! There is something for everyone in your poem. I especially like the reference to Alice in Wonderland--that is my connection of choice.
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Re: Whore bride
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th February 2017 @ 02:33:32 AM AEST
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maybe he, Aliester Crowley
is the savant of the mystical avant-garde
to you
like Charlie Bukowski is the realist
in me / or just the other way
however the words might
hunt for poem
locked into conscious constraints;
the eddy the swirl of stars
of smoke in wind
the imaginative mind
that twists like a heavy locket
swings from a string
like the gold that dangles
from the candle on a cake
to blow
this is one of my favorite poems /
whore bride - whore of revelation
I also like the word curiouser
just as SW mentioned.
it must of took a lot of thought
to fall from the sky
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Re: Whore bride
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 16th March 2017 @ 06:02:15 PM AEST
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Sounds like an LSD trip to me......
It took me on a ride :)
James |
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