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Wasted Insurrection
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
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Sunday, 5th March 2017 @ 03:58:21 AM in AEST
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oops
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Old Gollum
rebirth
formulated from dirt,
with memories
of the many emotional things
that still haunt
and will always hurt.
Desolation angels
degenerate
wasted insurrection looking for something,
with broken wings
I return
crippled by the past
the stench of a life time remains
am I doomed to make the same mistakes again.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
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2017-03-05 03:58:21]
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Re: Wasted Insurrection
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by alicewhite on
Sunday, 5th March 2017 @ 02:28:07 PM AEST
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| Always searching for my precious, makes it worth while in time x great write |
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Re: Wasted Insurrection
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 13th March 2017 @ 10:41:31 PM AEST
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The last stanza was very powerful indeed.
A very well executed piece!
James |
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