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throw up your hands
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 10th March 2017 @ 06:00:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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soaked clothes
in tears
her eyes first
the day born
locked in
my leaking
creeping up to
mouth their
sorrow ghost
crowded heads
these hands
can/'/t find
empty mourning
midwest train
river rises
seeping more wet
flooded with goodbyes
a hall forever
empty windowsill
current-less home
asleep of bones
blanket of night
caked in dirt
relentless.
Copyright ©
ming
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2017-03-10 18:00:55]
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Re: throw up your hands
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 11th March 2017 @ 01:33:35 AM AEST
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Mingingly haunting. As is your wont, I am left with impressions rather than summations.....just the way I like it.
Damn fine writing here. I/'/m waiting for the publishing career known as the Ming Dynasty.
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Re: throw up your hands
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th March 2017 @ 05:35:17 AM AEST
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| haunting, saw this film, two people trapped in a deep ravine in the desert, man and women from differing tribe , yet they were same age. the desert dry the sand the sweat, then the elliptical frustration of feeling trapped, was it because of different class, they two they were of differing class, or was it because truly they both were trapped as they were. we see who we are or we maybe pretend to see who were are by luck, or is it luck? I like your poem as usual. Peace! |
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Re: throw up your hands
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 12th March 2017 @ 10:39:03 PM AEST
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I enjoyed the poem but honestly I went many ways with it and in the end it was still over my head but in a positive way.
James |
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