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My palm
Contributed by
ming
on
Saturday, 11th March 2017 @ 08:50:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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never a fist
swallowing light
which door
welcomes
witch warning
!wake up!
to the night
and darkness
borrowed
till dawn
confusing once
with whenever/forever
I spell
with smoke
and vodka
snake-head
joke bed
undone
shadows edge
empty road
life line
broken.
Copyright ©
ming
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2017-03-11 20:50:24]
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Re: My palm
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th March 2017 @ 09:42:46 PM AEST
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I really like this Ming!
was there ever a road
to walk down freer than the
last - learn from - mentor to
make better - than the past
what would be the point
of the gift of art - if the answer
is no
Peace! |
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Re: My palm
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by alicewhite on
Sunday, 12th March 2017 @ 03:55:29 PM AEST
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| I know where your going here n as I said earlier u have to know where ur coming from to get there n Arthur/'/s fist meme is not what I mean fisty cuffs is not for me but a certain fist n thumb fits like a dream , |
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Re: My palm
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by Invierno on
Monday, 13th March 2017 @ 10:06:58 PM AEST
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A "take. Me back poem"..vodka regerence.
So llike uou to pull so much wth so litlle. The gift of minimalism....
I/'/m going to honor that cery talent right here... " ".
Invierno |
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Re: My palm
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 14th March 2017 @ 03:07:27 PM AEST
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I fell down the rabbit hole in this one
falling
oh so slowly.... |
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