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Lonely Zeroes
Contributed by
duff
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Tuesday, 14th March 2017 @ 09:42:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Youre a high-five in demise
Handshaking secret shallow
High society crystal drinking
Shaped ice for amusement
This is today and tomorrow
Invitations to pseudo hilarity
Grandiose arrival welcome
Bank accounts beyond love
Their caviar tongues a taste
A glimpse of internal hollow
Forever flying a lonely party
Copyright ©
duff
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2017-03-14 09:42:11]
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Re: Lonely Zeroes
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 14th March 2017 @ 10:48:39 AM AEST
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I/'/m glad this wasn/'/t dedicated to someone ;)
Very amusing and well wrote and very accurate as well if I may say. Great word selection as well.
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Re: Lonely Zeroes
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by ming on
Tuesday, 14th March 2017 @ 11:02:24 AM AEST
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Great one! The last two lines rocked the ending perfectly.
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Re: Lonely Zeroes
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 14th March 2017 @ 02:50:20 PM AEST
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deep inner vision of someone you displeased with I am guessing,
good to see you writing again.... |
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Re: Lonely Zeroes
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 14th March 2017 @ 02:50:22 PM AEST
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deep inner vision of someone you displeased with I am guessing,
good to see you writing again.... |
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Re: Lonely Zeroes
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 18th March 2017 @ 01:25:30 PM AEST
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This speaks to me of drug use of a certain flavor. Keywords in tandem, etc.
Maybe I/'/m all wrong, but if not, I like the subtlety.
Would be good to know.
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Re: Lonely Zeroes
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by alicewhite on
Wednesday, 19th April 2017 @ 08:01:16 PM AEST
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So acute is your insight here I fear its my party and I/'/ll cry if I want to , you would cry too if it happened to you .
My very own pity party
We all have one at some point lol x |
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