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GET OUT
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
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Friday, 17th March 2017 @ 05:29:48 PM in AEST
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Get out
It/'/s time to get out Break away from this hold Be adventurous, be bold Step out of the darkness and into the light
Cast out those demons Banish this pain Let me be happy once again
They are winning the war But you can win your freedom You have the power to break these bonds
Go do what is your destiny Escape purgatory Get out
By banjosandwitch 17/03/17 https://soundcloud.com/gary-banjosandwitch-worthington/sets/marchinon
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Re: GET OUT
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th March 2017 @ 05:54:59 PM AEST (User
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yes - very cool
Peace! |
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Re: GET OUT
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 18th March 2017 @ 11:55:24 AM AEST (User
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Great write!!!!!!!!
I/'/m with ya.......
James |
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Re: GET OUT
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Saturday, 18th March 2017 @ 04:26:50 PM AEST (User
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Bravo! A song of hope and renewal! You write with urgent conviction that comes from experience.
Bursting with certainty, you have channeled it to give others hope.
This is a distillation of a tangled and complicated process into bite-size pieces - A mantra in thin disguise.
Advice reveals the giver. You have overcome, and your poem rings fierce in your certainty that we can do the same. Splendid.
softerware |
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