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Natural High
Contributed by
thezenmonkey
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Friday, 24th March 2017 @ 02:00:17 PM in AEST
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I feel euphoric
Im up in the stars, im the man on the moon, no worries no drugs just a natural feeling a beautiful buzz, im not coming down im in the clouds above and one with the sky blowing with the breeze of the wind whichever way it does, im raving it up with the stars up above, Ill come down eventually but for now im up, im blessed by the gods, feeling the love, my body is floating away with the wind, my mind buzzing freedom is mine, clarity with which I see melodies I hear, poetry in the flesh, im the best, bad guy or good guy dont matter to me, im in a good mood in extasy, flying high feeling so nice, this feeling so good at such cheap a price, free on the house no drugs did I need, from the weight of the world I have been freed, no worry no problem no care in the world, higher than heaven where the gods dwell, love, pure love, thats how I feel!
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Re: Natural High
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by Invierno on
Friday, 24th March 2017 @ 04:50:16 PM AEST
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absolutely cool as sh*t! VERY cool. Excellent rhyme scheme with only one hiccup in the entire piece.
Rock it out, Man on the moon.
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Re: Natural High
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 25th March 2017 @ 06:48:48 PM AEST
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Wonderful write my man.
It feels unrehearsed and honest.
Loved it!!!!
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Re: Natural High
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2017 @ 03:16:49 AM AEST
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but what if you tried that on drugs, just one puff of thc
or maybe what if you just intaked some lead by accident
or the fumes of petrol, maybe a bad mcsandwich in the early morn, what then?
Aspirin, a little Starbucks, perhaps an artificial sweetener
or muscle man testosterone buster,
how about then?
Peace! |
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Re: Natural High
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 2nd April 2017 @ 01:51:24 AM AEST
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Ground control to TheZenMonkey
your orbits outstanding..... |
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