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alicewhite queen of the underworld Alice in underland
Contributed by
alicewhite
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Friday, 24th March 2017 @ 02:08:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
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Black star red star teddy bears picnic
Tom thumb major tom
Twinkle toes thumbelina
I dnt like pulled pork but I know that you do
I go apple bobbing at easter for you
I/'/ll be a good girl for you , if you want me to
And I/'/ll learn guitar to serenade you
With my major tom Black magic tribute
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alicewhite
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Re: alicewhite queen of the underworld Alice in underland
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by thezenmonkey on
Friday, 24th March 2017 @ 02:23:51 PM AEST
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| I don/'/t understand it, but i like it! i don/'/t have to understand it! |
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Re: alicewhite queen of the underworld Alice in underland
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by Invierno on
Friday, 24th March 2017 @ 04:47:53 PM AEST
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I like it! It has a snappy flow and the outside box verbiage is cool. Some bloke is lucky.
Invierno |
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Re: alicewhite queen of the underworld Alice in underland
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 24th March 2017 @ 04:48:01 PM AEST
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No your poem is better because you can/'/t comment on your own poems here. lol
James |
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Re: alicewhite queen of the underworld Alice in underland
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th March 2017 @ 02:58:38 AM AEST
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never do understand much most of the time
"thumbelina" before my time, this tiny girl
And Tom, his tiny tin can off in space, or was it a reflection
play happy birthday, that was what my dad who visited once asked me to do when he learned I played guitar
when I was teenager / happy birthday to you
happy birthday to you / which key dad which should
I play it in, I said...
Key of A he said, I mean B. Just play the damn song
ta ta da da, da da,
ta ta da da, da da,
and so on and so forth...
and so on and so forth...
it was fun while it lasted
WWII, in the South Pacific
Dad was fun like that.
I like your poem Alice
and if it were written on your birthday
I hope it was a special one!
Peace! |
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Re: alicewhite queen of the underworld Alice in underland
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 3rd February 2019 @ 04:08:45 AM AEST
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| We need more of this..... Pretty please! |
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