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Unknown
Contributed by
drone
on
Sunday, 26th March 2017 @ 02:06:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Do you need
What you cannot
define
do you want
what you cannot
describe
are there thoughts
not of your own
where despair
sends your heart
into the unknown
Copyright ©
drone
... [
2017-03-26 14:06:09]
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Re: Unknown
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by softerware on
Thursday, 30th March 2017 @ 08:31:42 PM AEST
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A tribute to yearning and our restless, curious longings. We know there is more, but what is it?
Without these thoughts you describe, this vague malcontent, we may be still riding on square wheels!
Instead, as you conclude, it sends our hearts into the unknown.
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Re: Unknown
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2017 @ 02:55:05 AM AEST
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a comedy of earnest thought
a collection of looking always
a constant filter that catches the air
a pilgrimage trying maybe to, but not understanding
or fully knowing the unknown
yet surely the unknown is fun
It can be electrifying
filled with glee at times, in desperate hours
yes glee all hearts pounding as one
egads all hearts pounding together
in cadence lock step
not a one skipping the beat
until you know
the unknown of final dread
wait someone/'/s missing
but then, hey, Im okay,
out the pop from the unknown
then they all say wow, may that is
surreal
Peace!
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Re: Unknown
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 2nd April 2017 @ 02:26:39 AM AEST
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I really liked this one
well done. |
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