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Throwback Thursday
Contributed by
Cathartic
on
Thursday, 30th March 2017 @ 11:53:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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the way it works out sometimes is like an abandoned car on route 304
littered with dirty deserted objects and
a graveyard of creatures
the image is unsettling
the car a landmark signaling, youve gone too far
ive looked for ways around finding myself here here in something so abandoned,
broken
unraveling beneath the rubble
awaiting new days in your confessions
knees buckling
in a world where you are at the center of it all,
i am pulled to the ground
the way it works out sometimes is me,
a woman
the image of a vessel
monument to the lost, home to dirty derelict things
a landmark signaling, this is where love comes to die
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2017-03-30 11:53:24]
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Re: Throwback Thursday
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th March 2017 @ 10:55:12 PM AEST
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this is an amazing and fascinating poem!
I really really like the title, throwback thursday;
then you describe it as by cathartic on thursday.
then you describe a scene - which took my breath away!
it/'/s funny how we measure reality some days, sort of,
sort of lost, then a description out of nowhere brings you back in.
this really is sound poetry, sound writing!
Well done!
Peace! |
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