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Taking Your Life
Contributed by
waynster
on
Friday, 31st March 2017 @ 05:12:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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You want to leave this world
because you cant take the pain
You allow the words of others
to drive you madly insane
Not knowing which way to turn
voices grow louder in your head
They scream louder than your conscience
telling you, youre better off dead
You cry from inside
and you cry out to the world in which you live
You tell yourself it isnt so
but if asked, your hand you would give
The demons take you over
you feel as if you can no longer catch your breath
Your world is crashing in
and the answer to you is only death
So caught up in misguided thought
not giving you a chance to think clear
You think of taking your life away
without any sense of fear
Life can be very bad
having times that we truly hate
To change your thoughts of dying
gives you a chance to change your fate
Take a deep breath
try to think in a positive way
Dont take that unforgiving step
I beg of you with these words I say
Written: 1 April 2017
Copyright 2017 E. Wayne Searles. All Rights Reserved
Copyright ©
waynster
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2017-03-31 17:12:44]
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Re: Taking Your Life
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 31st March 2017 @ 07:44:23 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem. Very well said indeed.
James |
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Re: Taking Your Life
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by lilblkcat on
Wednesday, 9th August 2017 @ 04:47:25 PM AEST
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| Wow. You captured the emotions perfectly and ended it with a spin. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Re: Taking Your Life
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by Lt.DansLegs on
Thursday, 31st October 2024 @ 10:00:00 PM AEST
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| I feel like you captured that feeling so precisely great poem |
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