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lock and key
Contributed by
softerware
on
Saturday, 8th April 2017 @ 03:29:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If he needed comfort, she was attracted;
The greater his problems, the more she reacted.
Knowing his neediness soon would beguile;
Feminine nurturing, as for a child.
Here was a chance she couldnt resist;
To turn back the clock and finally fix;
Rejections of childhood that so badly marred her.
Lock and key mating; buried in ardor.
She is his safety; He is her goal;
Someone to blame while hes out of control!
She needs to fix him; make right his mistakes;
The more that she does, the less effort he makes.
Marriage will break this fragile affection;
Neither can trust for their own self protection!
He will go on to find a new mother;
She will seek out a needier other.
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Continue to do what we do and regret;
That over and over, we get what we get.
In hormones we trust, except with a stranger;
(The more were compelled; the greater the danger!)
You may see cowards of those who escape;
(Leaving the lure with their mouths wide agape);
My heros are those who can flush with affection;
And promptly make haste in the other direction!
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Re: lock and key
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 8th April 2017 @ 06:31:18 AM AEST
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| This poem was awesome and the last stanza glorious. Funny and so true as well. You nailed it!!!! Bravo! |
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Re: lock and key
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by shelby on
Saturday, 8th April 2017 @ 09:26:20 AM AEST
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Great write, yea, I get it.
Michelle |
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Re: lock and key
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th April 2017 @ 10:35:28 PM AEST
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this is so powerfully true!
I felt this as a young man,
and I feel it now.
man oh man, I never did
feel, boy you could be something...
something is what we are,
no matter what we do or what
we pretend
I guess that/'/s why I still love
Tennessee Williams so much!
Great poem SW!
Peace! |
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Re: lock and key
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 8th April 2017 @ 10:40:26 PM AEST
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that last line hmm,
that is the reaction that attraction seems to shatter
we all know better
but that direction is unknown at that time.. |
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Re: lock and key
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th April 2017 @ 12:03:03 AM AEST
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//
Continue to do what we do and regret//
Not anymore! 😉
You are the wizard of words. So seemlessly without effort you make it look easy.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Sir Tim
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