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dancing on my own
Contributed by
ming
on
Wednesday, 12th April 2017 @ 06:21:04 PM in AEST
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body loosens
beneath my pen
vertigo floods
the mind
touch the bottom
of madness
where there are no doors
so off we twirl
dragging world behind
while sky darkens
and time rips away.
Copyright ©
ming
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2017-04-12 18:21:04]
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Re: dancing on my own
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by alicewhite on
Wednesday, 12th April 2017 @ 07:09:05 PM AEST
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Love it
Dancing cheek to cheek x |
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Re: dancing on my own
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 13th April 2017 @ 07:57:00 PM AEST
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| Yes we all need a calming force. I find walking in the woods does it for me. Great write!!! |
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Re: dancing on my own
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th April 2017 @ 09:08:04 PM AEST
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this reminds me of focusing on a specific
subject matter especially when you are confused or
upset in someway
A quiet focus / or as I just heard about, "A quiet passion" a biopic about Emily Dickinson.
I recently watched part of a PBS American Experience
documentary regarding WWI where they tell of the poet Alan Seeger who was one of the first Americans to volunteer in the French Foreign Legion - they recite his
poem, "I have a rendezvous with death", which is quite beautiful.
There/'/s something in the sorrow/'/s, something in the
madness, something in all time, that repeats
Great poem once again Ming!
Peace!
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Re: dancing on my own
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 13th April 2017 @ 09:58:25 PM AEST
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Want to feel that way.....thanks, Ming.
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Re: dancing on my own
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 16th April 2017 @ 04:20:37 PM AEST
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Read it again...I have a habit of auto-clicking on anything /'/Ming/'/.
My second read brought to mind Rumi. I should think you know of who I speak. If not, you will want to.
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