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I guess this is my Sylvia
Contributed by
alicewhite
on
Wednesday, 19th April 2017 @ 09:34:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Oh oh
No
Oh no here I you I
I nothing gone no more never
Go
Oh
So
Slow
Slow
Slowly
Silently so
As to breathe
Hmm
Breathe
Hmm
Nothing
In n out out n in
Woman
Woman sin
Sin sinners
Adam ant
Adam
Man ribcage
Bone marrow
She shallow
Hallowed sin sinister
Spinster needle prick sleeping beauty
Beast bride all and nothing
Sealed with a kiss
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Re: I guess this is my Sylvia
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 20th April 2017 @ 06:57:08 AM AEST
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I actually got turned on at the end.......... ( grin)
I/'/m that kind of dude- lol ( joking of course)
Someway, somehow I got it................
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Re: I guess this is my Sylvia
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by softerware on
Friday, 21st April 2017 @ 12:32:54 AM AEST
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This is like watching a prism break in slow motion and backward!
Many glistening little slivers of thought cascade around us until we near the end ,where the pieces become a whole.
Nice execution and a smart finish! A bit of an adventure to lead our imaginations astray. No better appetizer for the curious mind!
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Re: I guess this is my Sylvia
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by ming on
Friday, 21st April 2017 @ 10:02:56 AM AEST
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I love this. Enough said.
ming |
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Re: I guess this is my Sylvia
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd July 2017 @ 02:29:20 AM AEST
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i hate them all
always I do at first
glance
those all of them
oh and wait,
there is me
as if i am stuck
in an hour glass
like someone
painted me
to stay
stuck
And they painted
my picture
like it was
my best look
when it never
were
your sylvia
And I was adam
I wished I was
coming home
to a girl
whom cared
only for me
seems so crass
to believe
blue is freaky
freaky is a word
freaky is a world
that never skips
a beat
All the best beatnik/'/s
know or
want to know
a girl like you
at least once
in their crazy life
Pardon my comment
here, I am freelancing
as usual
like hover board
like a kid
You are cool Alice
And I am quite sure
positively Amazing
as well!
Peace!
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