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Look at this pain
Contributed by
alicewhite
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Friday, 21st April 2017 @ 12:34:58 PM in AEST
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Look at this pain
Look at this pain
I am terrified of my monster
Inside insane
Look at this pain
Again and again
No gain to be gained
Just pain after pain
I/'/m so very tired now
And I dont want to play
Look at this pain
Make it go away
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Re: Look at this pain
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 23rd April 2017 @ 12:06:56 AM AEST
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wicked is the game of pain
seems like
no progress is made
when it keeps coming back again |
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Re: Look at this pain
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd April 2017 @ 01:14:17 AM AEST
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So look look again
exactly what was prescribed
was exactly off, just by one
word, a tiny mistake.
How could that be. If it never were, It never could.
I say I am with you girl. Whoever you are.
I am the fellow with his hands in his pocket
who sometimes feels as though he was nowhere
that could ever be prescribed.
x
Peace! |
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Re: Look at this pain
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 13th September 2020 @ 03:24:30 AM AEST
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I/'/ve lived the feeling for decades suffering from
chronic pain. I get this....💝 |
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Re: Look at this pain
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd October 2020 @ 09:28:07 AM AEST
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Excellent poem. Very well written. Keep up the good work.
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