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Mind over matter
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
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Wednesday, 26th April 2017 @ 07:02:18 AM in AEST
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Mind over matter
My mind matters
But fools try to shatter
Destroy my chi
Crush my spirit animal
Break my joyous nature
Evil people walk among us
Destroying good people with fear and hate
Pretending to be a friend or a mate
Testing your tolerance to walk the right path
By making you think you are on the wrong
Destroying life/'/s sweet song
Of peace and harmony to all
Your mind matters
Seek out like minds
Be good to one another
Be kind
Have a happy mind
by banjosandwitch 25/04/17
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2017-04-26 07:02:18]
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Re: Mind over matter
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jigget on
Wednesday, 26th April 2017 @ 12:05:52 PM AEST
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okay, i like it.
it/'/s rapid and measured quite nicely.
i always appreciate internal rhyme,
i like the judicious use of words.
i like the lack of needless alphanumeric.
i like the intent, like a murmured insistence to just
lighten the /*****/ up.
i like your name.
i don/'/t like commenting.
i am not currently lying.
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Re: Mind over matter
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 26th April 2017 @ 11:10:57 PM AEST
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yes yes be strong stay strong
the minions of evil will try to trick us....
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Re: Mind over matter
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th April 2017 @ 10:26:48 PM AEST
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sanguine, positive and true
but, like you banjosandwitch
a happy mind begets a happy
mind that fears less about
helping out and actually encounters
more help making the next time
less fearful more resilient and more
prosperous
And this sort of sounds like never ending
like a great song
you never get sick of hearing
And songs like that actually do
exist
Thanks banjo man!
Peace!
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