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Resident in time
Contributed by
softerware
on
Saturday, 29th April 2017 @ 12:18:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Forager and thief of mine;
Come to steal a meal.
In the garden by the vine;
Little mouse revealed.
Run then stop; whiskers shiver;
Patent nose begins to quiver.
Eyes that shine. Hide and Seek;
I the mighty; you the weak.
Your life so quick to come and go;
Mine endless to compare;
Tiny creature, whys this so?
Its dreadfully unfair!
Its innocence that makes you strong;
Tis knowledge made me weak;
For you know not youll soon be gone;
And I your secret keep.
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2017-04-29 00:18:46]
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Re: Resident in time
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 29th April 2017 @ 12:47:44 AM AEST
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life is truly short
before you know it
we are gone..... |
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Re: Resident in time
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 29th April 2017 @ 05:51:45 AM AEST
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Awesome dip into the metaphysical pond! And done so at your usual high bar. I very much like this.
Until reading this poem, I never even considered the /'/big gip/'/ of such a short life to the infinite....thanks. lol
Invierno
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Re: Resident in time
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th April 2017 @ 10:08:24 AM AEST
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They breed and grow so fast, though, there`s always mice a plenty.
Does mankind really know their fate?
Awesome poem!!! |
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Re: Resident in time
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 1st May 2017 @ 03:17:21 PM AEST
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Ah, such a good day for beauty, and I/'/m glad you could be part of it! :)
//The rhythm and flow, the dance that bestows
Imagination then flows, and my world is let go//
I thought something to myself the other day. We know our fate... or do we?
//We understand it/'/s a fact that we will come to perish, yet even though this, most of our lives we shan/'/t cherish
Maybe we have to convince ourselves of a false end
So that living our lives, becomes more than pretend// |
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Re: Resident in time
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 4th May 2017 @ 09:25:45 PM AEST
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Splendid write as usual. Great visuals as well!!!
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Re: Resident in time
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th September 2020 @ 09:27:35 AM AEST
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| ooo this is good! |
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