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Gechwinds rhapsody in blue
Contributed by
alicewhite
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Tuesday, 16th May 2017 @ 06:08:39 PM in AEST
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mystical
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Gechwinds syndrome my gershwin rhapsody in blue
The puppy put inside of me clawed n scratched inside as it grew
How evil can he be to me
Dnt worry when I died too
Trick the old mystic man with your pure heart
Gve ears to him as requested body parts
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Re: Gechwinds rhapsody in blue
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 17th May 2017 @ 12:44:22 AM AEST
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Bizarre and fantastical. Loved the last two lines.
You/'/re a brilliant Ludwiggian poet,
Invinerno |
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Re: Gechwinds rhapsody in blue
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by joydeep_nath on
Wednesday, 17th May 2017 @ 04:06:42 AM AEST
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| awesome write..a good poem after a long time!! |
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Re: Gechwinds rhapsody in blue
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 17th May 2017 @ 09:51:36 AM AEST
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You just gave me Gastaut-Geschwind syndrome.
But I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Gechwinds rhapsody in blue
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 21st May 2017 @ 08:36:00 PM AEST
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| I was listening to tame impalas feels like we only go backwards when I read this.....trippy. |
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Re: Gechwinds rhapsody in blue
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by ming on
Monday, 22nd May 2017 @ 10:58:11 AM AEST
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The nuances in this write are liken to going down a rabbit hole. The line about ears is brilliant! Love.
ming |
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Re: Gechwinds rhapsody in blue
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th June 2017 @ 05:38:39 AM AEST
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no need for haste when Gechwinds
stays, it becomes hard to imagine why
i was and i was
a hippy with rose colored acid dropping
caricature always fine and soft and pure
a dog for you to pet, wishing to heel
upon your knee loving only to have your touch
pet me
no leash on life it was I who sought you
it was your touch that i required
heck, i didn/'/t care what you thought you
were or how rich or what you might pretend to
be good enough to feed me
i followed you everywhere you went
because that/'/s all I knew how to do/ and i was never insane and I only pretended to be sad when you were sad to be just like you so you would never feel alone or lost.
Peace! |
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