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Leaping Lighter
Contributed by
invierno
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Wednesday, 17th May 2017 @ 12:38:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I seek the next plain.
Oh!, invisible ledge I to leap,
away, from stain to stain as
ledge to ledge,
edge ever more refined,
lighter with each climb.
This time and each
break a piece; off
to the tailings!, growing,
piling failures;
Lo! Teacher Time has with
itself lighted ballast in my mind,
as tailings dark
demyst to opalesque lessons, refined
all the lighter now
for my next leap.
Copyright ©
invierno
... [
2017-05-17 00:38:30]
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Re: Leaping Lighter
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 17th May 2017 @ 09:54:12 AM AEST
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A leap of faith is all we can do usually. Just go for it.
Great write!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Leaping Lighter
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by softerware on
Thursday, 18th May 2017 @ 10:02:06 PM AEST
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I completely agree with you. If we look back, the hardest battles have turned to translucent ghosts that no longer have any hold over us. We have conquered.
The last four lines say so much about what many of us feel but cannot put into words as you do so well.
You have reminded us to rise above, and not dwell.
Written as seen through eyes that have crossed many bridges.
softerware |
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Re: Leaping Lighter
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 22nd May 2017 @ 04:46:10 PM AEST
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we do what we do
we are only human
we live and
hopefully we learn |
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