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To an old friend
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Sunday, 21st May 2017 @ 10:11:45 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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To an old friend
I see so many things that remind me of you
A mountain worn away by wind
Sunlight breaking through the folds of dying leaves
An autumn rain
A light
Bright and furious
A sparkling sea
Standing at the shores of memory
I remember the tide
The island air
As a child, I could not see the stars
Their light too far for my vision
Yet I would gaze into the sky
Trusting the awe in my fathers eyes
Then I saw the sea
The rocky shore
An empty blue
Shining in the starlight
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iodinelove
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2017-05-21 22:11:45]
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Re: To an old friend
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd May 2017 @ 12:45:51 AM AEST
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Great poem. I/'/ve read it a few times now and will probably read it again. Thank you for sharing it. Write-on!
// always something there to remind me // |
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Re: To an old friend
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by ming on
Monday, 22nd May 2017 @ 10:52:37 AM AEST
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Beautiful! Many awesome lines!
ming |
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Re: To an old friend
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2017 @ 01:42:50 PM AEST
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| Subtle in its beauty! |
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Re: To an old friend
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 7th July 2017 @ 05:27:38 PM AEST
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Loved the imagery and soothing tone of this.
It/'/s dark outside, it is peaceful and now I feel a sense of calm.
Nice work
Steve |
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Re: To an old friend
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by pooja on
Monday, 28th May 2018 @ 09:58:33 AM AEST
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| Lovely, sweet writing. I felt calm, wistful and not sure why but also a little sad while reading it. You created a beautiful imagery, very peaceful. Great poem ! God bless. |
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