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Memories Unspoken
Contributed by
softerware
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Saturday, 3rd June 2017 @ 07:44:05 PM in AEST
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Rise up on the battlefield;
While chimes the deadly knell;
Kneel beside the sword you wield;
And count the bodies felled.
Who has won for what youve done;
And how shall time describe;
These fallen sons whose colors run;
On torn flags in the sky.
They came too young in season;
To stop and wonder why;
Today he seeks a reason;
Why he alone survived.
His old eyes see the history;
Of friends, long gone, who fell;
A mystery to me that he;
Regrets he lived to tell.
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Re: Memories Unspoken
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 3rd June 2017 @ 07:46:34 PM AEST
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| Simply brilliant... |
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Re: Memories Unspoken
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd June 2017 @ 08:46:02 PM AEST
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indeed, brilliant! Always the young who showed so much promise. A human touch!
Thank you!
Peace! |
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Re: Memories Unspoken
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 3rd June 2017 @ 09:30:14 PM AEST
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| Those who survive the battle who are now older and wiser sit deep in thought as time and the years pass by are certainly haunted by what has happened and by those who did not survive. |
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Re: Memories Unspoken
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th June 2017 @ 01:35:09 PM AEST
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He probably feels guilty.
This one choked me up a bit. Awesome, as usual. |
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Re: Memories Unspoken
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 4th June 2017 @ 05:10:14 PM AEST
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Sublime in content and style.
Invierno |
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