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Staying Afloat
Contributed by
softerware
on
Sunday, 4th June 2017 @ 01:11:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Bobbing in the earth swirl;
Mourning happiness.
Down the canyons unfurled;
Love left no address.
Doomed to climb entangled vines;
Leaving thorn-filled scars;
Treading time, and left behind;
Remaining where we are.
Copyright ©
softerware
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2017-06-04 13:11:33]
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Re: Staying Afloat
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th June 2017 @ 01:31:56 PM AEST
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Yep, can relate to this one a lot! I hope it/'/s not a biography though.
Well penned. |
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Re: Staying Afloat
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 4th June 2017 @ 05:08:30 PM AEST
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Digging the seriousness! Proud of you for changing it up. I sure hope I have as much wisdom as you down the road, and the desire, time and gumption to write it out as you do. An honor.
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Re: Staying Afloat
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 4th June 2017 @ 08:55:28 PM AEST
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Very unique look at lost love.
Definitely different. I really like this! |
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Re: Staying Afloat
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 6th June 2017 @ 09:56:39 AM AEST
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You said so much with just a few words. Just like so many other I can easily relate. Another great piece.
Rich |
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Re: Staying Afloat
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 7th June 2017 @ 08:49:03 AM AEST
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wow
short and excellent
wow...... |
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Re: Staying Afloat
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by vikingbrokk on
Saturday, 29th July 2017 @ 09:39:48 PM AEST
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| Love it. |
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