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Thunder, Lightning and a minor E
Contributed by
Vic
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Wednesday, 7th June 2017 @ 11:29:28 PM in AEST
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You cant get too close to be
Nobodys ever ridden me
Cannot be no friend or foe
But I liven you when things get low
Wandering the grey-wet sky
Bolts of thunder ringing by
No one can ever harness me
Its no saying, sport or simile
I can be subtle with my sonic sound
When tested I can crack the ground
Following the blazing end
To create is why we descend
You hear, you see but cannot touch
The rule of nature is as such
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Vic
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2017-06-07 23:29:28]
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Re: Thunder, Lightning and a minor E
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 9th June 2017 @ 08:33:18 AM AEST
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Nice write.
Some great word choices- I had to read it twice!
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Re: Thunder, Lightning and a minor E
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 7th July 2017 @ 04:15:02 PM AEST
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I can only echo your sentiment, there is something awe inspiring about a storm.
I remember watching them through the window as a child, counting the seconds between that flash of lightning and the accompanying rumble of thunder.
Took me right back
Steve |
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