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Sleepy Heart
Contributed by
invierno
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Tuesday, 13th June 2017 @ 12:11:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Sleepy heart-
even an eyelash twitch to
your shuttered lids
begs the core to flitch a wink
for old times sake.
Why, remember, just yesterday
the train mourned long so so same
and then I knew
my heart would never sleep;
beat beat it goes,
beat beat it knows the unrelenting
long drawn whistle of endless tracks
stretched beyond memory
to a pinpoint,
from energy, from bliss,
to the joyless eyes I see, unseeing,
to this.
Copyright ©
invierno
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2017-06-13 12:11:52]
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Re: Sleepy Heart
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by softerware on
Saturday, 17th June 2017 @ 03:59:34 PM AEST
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I/'/m standing and applauding!
The rhythm of this is exquisite. The visions it creates in my minds eye tell your story within my own experience. There is no better fit between write and reader.
You have taken me FROM ENERGY, FROM BLISS, TO THE JOYLESS EYES I SEE , UNSEEING, TO THIS.
Truly you do not spare us your philosophy, but manage to take us into your musings and swirl us around inside your perceptions.
I am reminded of Dorothy in the Kansas tornado.
Whata ride Michael!
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Re: Sleepy Heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th June 2017 @ 02:55:26 PM AEST
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This is great, even though the ending gave me the sads. That/'/s poetry, though, correct? To stir the emotions? Masterful!
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