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Love's Ebb and Flow
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
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Sunday, 18th June 2017 @ 05:30:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Love/'/s Ebb and Flow
Resolution
Yet no restitution
For a love that has been lost
Love/'/s constitution
Yet no absolution
For the toll has been paid, a heavenly cost
Distance/'/s consultation
It offers futile consolation
For deep into the recesses of a broken mind it has been tossed
Resuscitation
From anger comes emancipation
Love never again to be lost
2017
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ingeniusidiot
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2017-06-18 17:30:11]
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Re: Love's Ebb and Flow
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by softerware on
Sunday, 25th June 2017 @ 01:18:49 PM AEST
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Many wonderful and accurate statements here. The line, FOR THE TOLL HAS BEEN PAID, A HEAVENLY COST, is such a powerful summary of this story! Its impact seems more suited to stand alone, perhaps as the closing line, to receive its full due. An enjoyable study of loves path! In a rhyme that testifies to your skill!
Most splendid is the prelude that welcomes us to your tale as sincerely as an extended hand in friendship.
It is apparent my friend, that you need not write often to write exceptionally well!
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Re: Love's Ebb and Flow
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 7th July 2017 @ 04:34:02 PM AEST
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I guess the great thing about poetry is there are no rules, write when you feel rather than be chained to churning out sentences for the sake of it.
I hadn/'/t delivered anything for a while here until today so I know where you are coming from.
Clearly you/'/ve thought about what you wanted to say and the impact of this piece is worthy of the wait.
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