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Clues
Contributed by
softerware
on
Monday, 26th June 2017 @ 09:07:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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She gave her body that he might love her;
Hold no other one above her.
He gave romance to know her flesh;
To soothe his pain and loneliness.
Entangled in a brief charade;
The deal they brokered went astray.
No lessons learned; no wrongs unmasked;
No changes made; no questions asked.
Ingoring clues love tried to leave;
Until it failed to thrive deceived;
On secrets, lies, and make-believe.
Copyright ©
softerware
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2017-06-26 21:07:06]
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Re: Clues
(User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 27th June 2017 @ 04:19:50 AM AEST
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Yet another fabulous piece. This was perfectly penned. Anyone that has been in lust or love can immediately relate. I cant honestly say that I have a favorite part because the whole piece flowed so effortlessly from beginning to end. Thank you yet again. :)
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Re: Clues
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 28th June 2017 @ 04:11:09 PM AEST
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Beautiful flow, a deep piece, your way with words...unique
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Re: Clues
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by Invierno on
Friday, 30th June 2017 @ 08:50:35 PM AEST
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Masterful. Such a gift you have.....
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Re: Clues
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 5th July 2017 @ 11:53:39 PM AEST
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A Love story I can relate to
well written
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