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Truth be told
Contributed by
softerware
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Wednesday, 28th June 2017 @ 05:10:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Stop to ask me how I feel;
The answer is: Im NUMB.
On an endless even keel;
No swings, no hits, no runs.
No emotion in my thoughts,
Not angst, or satisfaction;
Like a clock whose hands are caught,
Still ticking without traction.
Im never missed; Im never late;
I just sit at the station;
While friends await, I contemplate;
Unopened invitations.
A doorway out of endlessness;
Somewhere somehow awaits;
Promising to bring me less
Benign and flaccid fates.
Ill not be free though I may see;
It yawning open wide;
While none but I can carry me;
Across the other side.
Copyright ©
softerware
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2017-06-28 17:10:22]
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Re: Truth be told
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by Invierno on
Friday, 30th June 2017 @ 08:48:45 PM AEST
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Pregnant with meaning and interpretation.
Sounds like a battle with SSRI/'/s, but of course this is not the case.
This new vein you/'/ve mined within your psyche is a painful one, but to us, the recipients of your mining, the result is pure golden nuggets of poetry.
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Re: Truth be told
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 7th July 2017 @ 05:00:40 PM AEST
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A gem of a write and one I/'/m sure many people going through the same thing will identify.
It/'/s easy for people around those with depression to say "Snap out of it" but that just comes from a lack of understanding.
It must feel like being shut in a dark room trying to find the door.
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