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Black Whip Kisses
Contributed by
ArdRi79
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Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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BLACK WHIP KISSES
Reality scorching
Scoring pale flesh
Red welts of
Wisdom rising
Flesh flushing
Breath quickening
Hyperventilating
Muscle tensing
Form writhing
Voice moaning
Pleading needing release
Vindication
Born in the damnation
of pains embrace
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2003-06-02 12:35:00]
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Re: Black Whip Kisses
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:33:03 PM AEST
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| wow....wow...... |
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Re: Black Whip Kisses
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by norm on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 04:31:48 PM AEST
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Where, under the sun
Could this be called fun?
Where is this done?
Why doesn't it stun
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Re: Black Whip Kisses
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by mckayla on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 01:25:51 PM AEST
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Have to be honest, I didnt really understand this one. But great write nonetheless.
mckayla........AWE THAT WAS THE LAST |
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