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Forbidden
Contributed by
FireStarter
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Sunday, 2nd July 2017 @ 03:20:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Trembling hands,
And a tortured heart
Crying out
When we/'/re miles apart
The agony,
the deep pain
The sharp knives
Leave a stain
On the sleeve
Of my white t-shirt
Theres no pain,
If theres also no hurt
Memories so real
They pierce your soul
How the hell in this life
Will I heal that woe?
The pain of kissing you
for the first time
Of holding your hand,
And calling you mine
The first time we made love
Is seared in my brain...
Breaking my heart,
Smearing the pain
Now we/'/re just friends..
Or is it more....
You say you/'/re forbidden
It makes my heart sore
One last thing I wanna say
Is that I LOVE YOU
Forever and always....
My forbidden fruit
Copyright ©
FireStarter
... [
2017-07-02 03:20:37]
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Re: Forbidden
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 5th July 2017 @ 10:18:31 PM AEST
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ouch
love hurts,
well done. |
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Re: Forbidden
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by softerware on
Sunday, 9th July 2017 @ 12:59:42 AM AEST
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No one can read this and not feel it.
You have put feelings into language we can all touch. It is a sad, but lovely story.
Thank you for sharing it so eloquently.
softerware |
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Re: Forbidden
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by lilblkcat on
Tuesday, 8th August 2017 @ 09:18:25 PM AEST
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| Very moving. I feel the pain you write. |
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