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paper tiger
Contributed by
ming
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Monday, 3rd July 2017 @ 12:57:31 PM in AEST
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inked lines as smoke signals
understanding/rescue/relief
oh smog smeared stars
oh dark as tar night
empty echos hallowed out
falling out un-contained
guilt and scars her name itself
whimpered or swallowed
discordant turmoil pushing
to be present tired sad self
can she stand up?
Copyright ©
ming
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2017-07-03 12:57:31]
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Re: paper tiger
(User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on
Tuesday, 4th July 2017 @ 12:11:24 AM AEST
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ripping and gripping. You had me tensed. Wonderful words...
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Re: paper tiger
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th September 2020 @ 10:46:45 AM AEST
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| oh cliff hanger this is good |
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