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Is it real?
Contributed by
softerware
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Saturday, 8th July 2017 @ 01:05:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Have you felt the sabatage; that chains you to a myth?
Invisible phenomenon that wont be tampered with?
You may not see it coming; or plan its swift good-by;
We cannot own or touch it; its borne upon a sigh.
Its image changes constantly; it utters not a word.
And those who would describe it; sound patently absurd.
Science cannot measure it; for little else compares;
If it were standing next to you; you might not know its there!
Its not been heard; or photgraphed;
No walls have held it back;
But who of us cannot recall the moment love attacked?
Copyright ©
softerware
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2017-07-08 01:05:52]
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Re: Is it real?
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by igba on
Saturday, 8th July 2017 @ 11:51:45 AM AEST
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| Deep. Great write |
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Re: Is it real?
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by ingeniusidiot on
Saturday, 8th July 2017 @ 09:27:58 PM AEST
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Very deep indeed. And love and time seem to go hand in hand. Tho both can lift you up they can tear you down just the same. Another enjoyable read :))
Rich |
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Re: Is it real?
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 9th July 2017 @ 12:39:36 AM AEST
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yes it left its footprints
all up and down my back lol |
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Re: Is it real?
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 17th July 2017 @ 01:31:07 PM AEST
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| the first stanza is excellent. just your choice of words and the way it flows. the rest is good too but those 2 lines stand out to me. nicely done. |
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