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I'm Going Home
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Monday, 24th July 2017 @ 02:16:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I/'/m going home
To the place the spirits roam
I/'/m going home
I hope I won/'/t be all alone
I/'/m going home
To a place I can call my own
I/'/m going back home
To the place I came from
A king in search of his throne
Please God
Don/'/t send me off all alone
Guide me towards the light
Where my future shall be bright
I/'/m going home
Following the light
Pray to God for me
That I/'/ll be alright
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jamesstockdale
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2017-07-24 14:16:50]
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Re: I'm Going Home
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 25th July 2017 @ 01:17:01 PM AEST
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I hope that this is just a poem and you arent really thinking about doing that. You penned it very well but if you ever need someone to talk to send me a message.
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Re: I'm Going Home
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 26th July 2017 @ 06:18:25 PM AEST
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You don/'/t write about it being soon, hence your poem applies to all believers in western religions. This could be a southern baptist tent revival song, the way it reads.
It/'/s really cool viewed in that light. The alternatives are suicide, (which is irreconcilable to the poet I know), or that you have an incurable illness or the like. I haven/'/t detected that in your words, (light visitor as of late, but I always seek your name out for a read), so, I don/'/t think it/'/s that.
Ergo sum, I believe Door A is correct, Alex. Final Answer.
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Re: I'm Going Home
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by softerware on
Thursday, 27th July 2017 @ 01:37:06 AM AEST
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James, this is lovely. Your writing always reveals the kind and generous person I know you to be.
This is written as almost a prayer, and I hope you got the answer you wanted.
Please give me a hello over the fence; I miss the warmth of talking to you!
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Re: I'm Going Home
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th March 2019 @ 10:38:53 AM AEST
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Kinda reminds me of a blues song but if I pay heed to the category it/'/s posted under, it/'/s scary. Really good to know you/'/re still with us peeps on this side of the dirt.
Nicely done, Jimmy
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Re: I'm Going Home
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st August 2020 @ 09:27:08 AM AEST
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// I must comment on this one again.
You will be just fine. It won`t be a worldly plain where you`re tethered down.
Take care, please. ♥
Dugan
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