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Confusion
Contributed by
marcrob
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Tuesday, 25th July 2017 @ 09:16:06 PM in AEST
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When was it?
How did that go?
there was something
was there really no.
Yesterday is a blur
Tomorrow unknown
Who was it who hurt me?
I don/'/t know
What was his name?
What did he do?
I know it was something
not right, no good, poo
Days of then
Merge into one
I can/'/t recall
No nothing at all
I made that decision
To leave the nest
I think now i am
Starting to forget
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marcrob
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2017-07-25 21:16:06]
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Re: Confusion
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 26th July 2017 @ 06:12:32 PM AEST
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Really good subject you bring up here. Disorientation in one/'/s life on an en mass scale. I suffer from it also.
The more you right, the more fluid your words will become. When you find a style that fits, go with it. You have a lifetime to dabble and delve into various poetic styles.
I like what you did here. My time spent commenting is the proof. Time is the most valuable commodity I possess.
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Re: Confusion
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by softerware on
Thursday, 27th July 2017 @ 01:30:01 AM AEST
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Well said! The confusion you express is a downward spiral at times. Its hard to repair what we cant get a grip on!
I am beginning to forget things and the only saving grace is that people don/'/t expect me to remember anymore!
You made a hard decision, --but a nest can be prison, too. Its a good reminder, and your writing style mimics the reality of it.
softerware
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