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I COULD
Contributed by
softerware
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Wednesday, 26th July 2017 @ 07:25:04 PM in AEST
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I could say that I am unable to do it.
Or I could better equip myself and try again.
I could say that I failed.
Or I could say that I am getting closer to the answer!
I could blame you for what has happened.
Or I could figure out why I am afraid to take control.
I could swear Ill never do it again.
Or I could realize that I must have done it wrong.
I could keep trying to fix the past.
Or I could accept that I was a victim and let it go.
I could quit;
But what would I do with this life I own?
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Re: I COULD
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by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 27th July 2017 @ 06:44:49 AM AEST
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WOW!! you summed up alot of what i have been dealing with for a long time in just a few lines. But I think that these are questions we ask and answers that we give ourselves over and over again and doubt that we will ever stop asking them no matter how many times we give ourselves the same answers.
Another great piece :)
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Re: I COULD
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 28th July 2017 @ 06:30:46 PM AEST
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Buck passers. I hear it every day. I don/'/t however subscribe to that mentality.
Suck it up and be responsible.
Wonderfully written words of wisdom!!! |
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Re: I COULD
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th July 2017 @ 02:40:52 AM AEST
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whoa, this is uniquely how I think quite often
A - I am not equipped with the knowledge to figure this problem out.
B - it sucks to have failed without learning a darn thing,
failing = learning, being earnestly involved in learning something important - but for some like me, it takes a lot of practice.
C - I would hide that, the team player, hide that, no blame, I know what that/'/s like... I do
D - see B
E - somehow this sentiment carves me up
I think it makes me dream in ways I would never dream
and never ever seems dull - man I wish I knew why...
F - I want to, just wait it out so I can quit a handsome prince, just like I wish, once upon a time
Gee is for G - I Gould / it is in the water / where you came from Mr Mc
You got me thinking about that
I Could - I thought that a long time ago
deeply as though I could see the future
if I did
Peace! |
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Re: I COULD
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by thezenmonkey on
Tuesday, 1st August 2017 @ 11:14:50 PM AEST
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| I like the message of this poem, try to think positive! |
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